Is I don't want this to be verbose correct?

well that's not a question its a statement so i see the situation here.....you have a question mark (?) where a period(.) should be.

Move on bro. I wanted my ex back so bad, and she didn't want me. I moved on found someone way better and now my ex wants me back.

He doesn't want to. "He" is a third person singular pronoun. The third person singular of "do" is "does."

As a woman my best advice to you is to move on. You can spend years in the endless pursuit of someone that you can never have. Or you can cut your losses now and recover your dignity. It won´t be...

You should seek an "Adoption Agency", or get with your family to see who can possibly help u with this.