Is this a good monologue?

Answer:
My monologue i had an idea for is:

You know that feeling
when your ALMOST asleep
and you feel like your falling?
that's how i feel right now
like theres nothing to hold on to
nothing to look for
nothing to say
absolute darkness
i don't know what to think
where to go
what to do
So i just keep falling

MAKE IT LONGER
First answer by Rozy12347. Last edit by MaddiMaddi. Contributor trust: 2 [recommend contributor recommended]. Question popularity: 1 [recommend question].