When it has a subject, verb, punctuation, capitalization, a predicate, and a complete thought. A sentence is a sentence when it is handed down by a judge (or a magistrate).
It is understandable - so in that sense it "makes sense" - but what it appears to be saying would be easier stated as "I revere him'. One doesn't generally "pay" reverence, nor is there a "towards"...
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