The girl stepped as lightly as a panther stalking its pray.
Time was as slow as a turtle migrating from the North to the South pole.
The sinister man cackled like a hyena in the night.
Her breath became strained like a fish out of water.
She was as cohesive as a parasite, never letting go, never going away.
Her heart beat like a drum as she drew her love closer.
My body slithered like a snake to the suave music.
The light penetrated the window and fell upon my strained eyes like a stake driven into a vampire.
The shot rang in my ears like a gong and it sat in the still in the night as an owl who'd just been awoken and death came as slow as life. (In this there are who similes)